Here is a new poem I wrote. Please let me know what you think.
Alyssa/United States
No one knows what its like, to feel the pain that I feel.
They don't know what its like to hurt like I do.
They giggle and snicker as I walk past them.
My heart is hurt, for I have lost a friend.
He was brave, smart, and gold-hearted.
His birthday is the day that he passed,
A happy, joyfull day turned to the worst.
Still they laugh, and still I cry.
I stand up tall, like nothing is wrong, but not even my outside, and hide the pain that is inside.
