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  • 10-18-2011 2:49 PM In reply to

    • Alexa N
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    Re: ePals Collaborative Story: Sophie and the Magical Creature! Add to our story.

    The animal was light blue and had big angel-like wings with dark blue spots all over it's body it was an ice pheonix! Sophie and Paschal were terrified....


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  • 04-14-2010 5:38 PM In reply to

    • Shelby L
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    Re: ePals Collaborative Story: Sophie and the Magical Creature! Add to our story.

    "Why?..." asked  Pascal "Why wan't we leave?"

    "Beacuse when you are hurt you would want someone  to help you, right? Sophie replied

    "Yah i guess." Pascal sighed

    As soon as they said that the little monster came out.  Pascal hid behind Sophie squeezing for dear life. Sophie bent downand said,

    "Hello! Im Sophie an this is my brother Pascal,  are you an elf?

    "No, I am an Ogla.... the servent ogla."Said the mysterious creature

    "Oh, well we saw you run by and were wondering."

    "SHE was wondering, not me!" Pascal said interupting Sophie half way through her sentance.

    "As I was saying I was wonder ing if you were okay? You looked hurt." Sophie sai dout of great curiosity

    "Yes i'm fine you must leave now go, go hurry you don't have much time" He said franticly "Take some wood and go now."

    Sophie and Pascal grabbed the wood as fast as they could and ran, ran as fast as they could.

     

     

                                      THE END

     


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  • 04-14-2010 5:37 PM In reply to

    • Scott R
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    Re: ePals Collaborative Story: Sophie and the Magical Creature! Add to our story.

    "No" said Pascal "Not all magical things are good."

    "Not everything is out to get you" said Sophie.

    "If thats true, then why does it have such big teeth" Pascal cried before he bolted from the scene.

    " How would you know the size of it's..." said Sophie turning around slowly "...teeth" she finished in a wisper.

    The creature looked like a beaver with clothes ,but had a peacock tail. It also had 10 inch long teeth! Sophie screamed and ran. The creature roared. she caught up to her brother and said he was right. When they exited the forest they realized they were completely lost. 


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  • 04-14-2010 5:36 PM In reply to

    • Jason S
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    Re: ePals Collaborative Story: Sophie and the Magical Creature! Add to our story.

    And they went into the woods to find him.Oh! there he is,Said Sophie.Why are you crying my friend.Ahhhh! A MONSTER!!!!(Pascal yelled).NO,NO please don`t go.Plaese help me, the evil witch cast a spell on me,and now i look like a MONSTER!!!!!!!Don`t worrry my friend(said Sophie)we`ll help you.Last night before they went home the man told them about the magic river,it can undo any spell that was cast on you,if you drink the water.The next day while the witch was guarding the river and was still sleeping.The man drank IT AND TURND TO A HANDSOME PRINCE   


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  • 04-14-2010 5:36 PM In reply to

    • Nadia L
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    Re: ePals Collaborative Story: Sophie and the Magical Creature! Add to our story.

    As Sophie and Pascal went on searching for the mysterious creature, a long cry. Pascal looked frightened.

    "Sophie, I'm really scared let's get out of here!"mumbled Pascal.

     "No, we can't go back Pascal!" Sophie said firmly.

    Then, a small creature came out of the bushes and screamed!!!!!!!!!

    "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!" screamed Pascal and Sophie.

    The small creature stood up. Pascal and Sophie were frightened and they they were so shocked they coudn't even feel their legs, and fell. Then, the creature started crying. Sophie and Pascal stared at him and were frightened no more. They stood up slowly and cautiously and walked slowly towards the weeping creature.

    "Hello, why are you crying?" said Sophie, still alittle cautious,"Can you speak?" 

    "Hello," said the unknown creature, as he started to weep no more," Yes, I can talk, who are you?"

    " I'm Sophie and this is Pascal," said Sophie.

    "Well nice to meet you. I am Peter, I am a troll" said Peter.

     


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  • 04-14-2010 5:35 PM In reply to

    • Anjelica C
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    Re: ePals Collaborative Story: Sophie and the Magical Creature! Add to our story.

    They ran through the woods to find the little creature. Suddenly they ran into a troll and it was definately hurt. Its arm was bleeding because it ran into a glass door. Sophie asked "Are you alright?" The troll replied "I don't think so." They all went through the woods and found a small cottage. They went in and found a first aid kit. They stiched him up and he thanked them for comforting him during his pain.


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  • 04-14-2010 5:35 PM In reply to

    • Danica D
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    Re: ePals Collaborative Story: Sophie and the Magical Creature! Add to our story.

    "...But what if it's evil and tries to hurt us?" asked Pascal.

    "Oh, Pascal, I doubt anything will hurt us. This is a magical place. Now, let's go find him!" said Sophie.

    Sophie and Pascal went on into the woods in search of the small, magical creature. Deep inside the woods, they stumbled upon a majestic puple door with black writings carved on it and along the sides of the door were golden flowers as beautiful as the sunset.

    "This is odd. Why on Earth is there a door... on the tree?!" wondered Pascal.

    "I don't know, but it looks magical. Let's go inside! I think that magical creature might be in there. And there may be all kinds of creatures in there as well!" Sophie suggested.

    They tried to oped the door, but it wouldn't budge. Pascal and Sophie pulled and pulled until suddenly a voice spoke from below.

    "You can't open the door without a key," said the voice.

    Then a small creature came flying and put the key inside. And the door opened...

      


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  • 04-14-2010 5:35 PM In reply to

    • Tamara N
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    Re: ePals Collaborative Story: Sophie and the Magical Creature! Add to our story.

    Sophie and Pascal follwed a path of blood along the moonlight. A breeze of dryed leaves twirled to a small twister then danced upon a bed of glistening water. Finally both siblings realised that they arrived at a den carved in stone an wood alongside a shallow waterfall.

    " Wow, how beautiful this place maybe with fireflies lighting the way almost like a pathway to heaven." whispered Sophie.

    " Yep,but wheres that freaky little creature." said Pascal.

    " You are ruining the mood, but you right. Look theres a small cave across that stone bridge." said Sophie

    " I changed my mind let's go back." cried Pascal

    " Don't worry I'm here, and the poor thing is hurt we have to help it." said Sophie.

    So with a bit hesitation they crossed along a bridge to the creatures lair. Small but big enough for them to crall in a small crying creature layed there. Gentle Sophie held him and found that he was a little troll that had a cut on his leg.

    " Don't worry little troll I will help you." said Sophie

    Her skirt was ripped to wrap the creatures leg.

    " For your good deed to me, close your eyes to be brought back home." giggled the Troll

    In an instant there were back home with wood and a pocket full of gold.

    " HOW?" yelled Pascal


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  • 04-14-2010 5:35 PM In reply to

    • Michael V
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    Re: ePals Collaborative Story: Sophie and the Magical Creature! Add to our story.

    "Don't go after it," yelled Pascal.

    "I have to find out what it is," Sophie yelled back.

    Sophie just kept running.  Pascal was afraid to be left alone so he went after her.

    They finally started catching up to the creature.  Sophie could almost see what it was.  Suddenly it disappeared in a cloud of smoke.

    "What happened," said Sophie.

    "I have no idea," Pascal said.

    Suddenly the little creature reappeared and said to them, "I came from a different dimension in order to stop the destruction of this world."

    Pascal asked excitedly, "Really?"

    The creature replied, "No"

    "I was sent here to watch over you and protect you from the horrors of these woods.  Now leave.  I will be oyur gaurdian."

    They then left the forest. 


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  • 04-14-2010 5:34 PM In reply to

    • Tristan S
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    Re: ePals Collaborative Story: Sophie and the Magical Creature! Add to our story.

    "Oh fine I'll stay," replied Pascal.

    Sophie and Pascal started to walk around looking for the creature. After a while they finally found it dart by a nearby tree.

    "We have to catch up to it!" cried Sophie.

    The two quickly chased after it and finally caught up to the creature when it was eating a berry from a bush. Once the creature  turned around they Sophie and Pascal noticed that it was some sort of fox.

    "Don't worry we're not here to hurt you," said Pascal.

    The fox calmed down and looked at Pascal unusually, as if it were confused. Sophie approached the fox with caution. She inspected the fox and noticed that it had a gash on its leg.

    "Oh dear!" Sophie exclaimed.

    "What's wrong?" asked Pascal.

    "The poor thing has a gash on its leg!" cried Sophie.

    "I think we should treat it." replied Pascal.


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  • 04-14-2010 5:33 PM In reply to

    • Jonas-Matthew T
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    Re: ePals Collaborative Story: Sophie and the Magical Creature! Add to our story.

    "Ugh! I don't want to," Pascal complained.

    "C'mon, it will be fun. Don't be such a big chicken," said sophie as she stuck her tongue out at Pascal.

    "I am not a chicken, it's just that it could be dangerous," protested Pascal.

    Just then Sophie ran after the creature to see what it was. Pascal followed because he was too scared to be left alone. Just as Pascal caught up to Sophie, he saw the creature! It had transformed into a powerful warlock that was disguised as a weasel.

    "Umm, hi," Sophie said scaredly.

    "Do not be afraid. I am a peaceful warlock. I was just running through here to gather some ingredients for my potion," the warlock said calmly.

    "Wait! You look familiar, you're Dumbledore!" said Sophie.

    "No, he looks more like Gandolf," Pascal said.

    "No, I am Crompety the Wizard!" Crompety the Wizard announced.

    "Can you please send us home with a magical spell? We don't really know how to get of this forest." Sophie asked politely.

    "Sure," Crompety the Wizard said.

    Sophie and Pascal arrived home safely with the help of Crompety the Wizard and they lived happily ever after.


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  • 04-14-2010 5:33 PM In reply to

    • Francesca P
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    Re: ePals Collaborative Story: Sophie and the Magical Creature! Add to our story.

    "Oh please Sophie! Do we really have to?" cried Pascal.

    "Yes Pascal, if you were hurt wouldn't you want someone to go and help you?" said Sophie.

    "I guess you're right Sophie...I will go with you to go help that poor little creature," Pascal sighed "But if it's not a nice little creature, I'm out of here!"

    So there they went on. Pascal and Sophie searching the woods for the little creature they saw pass by. They had totally forgotten about the wood that they needed to bring back to camp. But I guess that was the last thing Sophie and Pascal had on their list.

    Sophie gasped, "Pascal! Look! but keep quiet, we don't want to scare the poor thing off again."

    But before Sophie could finish her sentence, Pascal had screamed in shock and scared the creature into the bushes.

    Sophie rushed over to the bushes where she picked up what looked like a troll. "Oh my!" Sophie exclaimed in shock.

    "Sophie, is that a troll?" Pascal asked.

    "Why yes, I am a troll. But not the mean kind. I am an exceptionally kind troll. The names Henry, how do you do?" said Henry.

    "I am Sophie and this is my brother Pascal."

    Pascal had been hiding behind Sophie and was still shaking from the amuseing shock that had happened to him.

    "Pascal, you have some water and a granola bar in your sack right?" Asked Sophie.

    "Umm.. Yes I do. Henry would you like my food? You seem terribly hungry and I myself right now am not." Said Pascal.

    "Thank you very much Pascal! I am pleased to meet such nice people in this magical forest. I appreciate this from you and in return, here's a magic stone. Basically what it is is a teleporter." Said Pascal.

    They said their "goodbyes" and left to gather up the wood they needed. With the magical stone they had found, they teleported back to their camp safe and sound.

    The End


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  • 04-14-2010 5:33 PM In reply to

    • Amanda C
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    Re: ePals Collaborative Story: Sophie and the Magical Creature! Add to our story.

    They looked through the bushes, through the trees,  and even in the water. Then Pascal stoped and said " what if this creature is not friendly ".

    " dont worry Pascal, it is only hurt and we must help it or else it might not survive. " said Sophie in a worried voice.

    Then all of the sudden the creature appered to them and asked them for help. Sophie asked " what is your name? " he replied " my name is Peru and I am

    a I'm am elf ". " An elf " Pascal said in a surprized voice " so I was worried for nothing. '' What's the proplem " Sophie said " I think i broke a leg when I triped over

    magical log " . " Don't worry we can help, all we need is some leaves to wrap your leg up " said Sophie thats always in a helpful mood. As Pascal gathered leaves,

    Soghie was busy fixing Peru's leg and before you know it it was fixed. " Thankyou kind strangers , I must be off now so goodbye " said the happy elf "goodbye"

    said the childeren. The End


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  • 04-14-2010 5:32 PM In reply to

    • Marc A
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    Re: ePals Collaborative Story: Sophie and the Magical Creature! Add to our story.

    As they ran they considered the possibilities of what kind of animal or creature the thing was. "I bet he's a brownie!" Sophie remarked. "No silly he's a cat that can walk! Of course he's a brownie," Pascal shouted. The brownie cringed in it's hiding place as he heard the kids run deeper into the creature infested woods. After a while Pascal stopped and started to walk more slowly and cautiously. "What are you doing Pascal? We should try to catch it as fast as we can or else it will take us the whole day!" whined Sophie. "You remember Uncle Ted?" Pascal waited for an answer and hearing none, went on. "He died remember, because of a large monster whiched dragged him half alive back into the forest awaiting to eat his prize." Pascal let his words sink in as he started to sniff the air. "Ummm... did you really have to freak me out like that! I wasn't even there remember, and you guys wouldn't tell me what happened to him." Sophie remarked "Let's go back home before your so called monster comes eats us." "TOO LATE!" They jumped in fright and looked up at this horrid beast. It had red eyes that seem to see through you, its face was wrinkled and had scabs and dead flies on its mangled hair. He had pointed ears and a burnt beard. "HE HE HE look what I found, a tasty little meal for dinner." It bellowed. He licked his lips as the children tried to escape his grasp.


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  • 04-14-2010 5:32 PM In reply to

    • Holly B
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    Re: ePals Collaborative Story: Sophie and the Magical Creature! Add to our story.

    Sophie and Pascal slowly walked farther towards the sound. On thier way they saw a little light. As they moved closer they found it to be a cute little fairy, harmless. They stared at it for awhile but then went on with their search. Once they found him, Pascal stopped and forced Sophie to go first. Sophie, without hesitating, walked closer to the creature. "Hello" said Sophie. The creature did nothing but look up quickly then continue to look down. "Don't worry" said Pascal "We aren't here to hurt you we're here to help you". The creature looked up as if he understood what they had just said. They herd a mumble. "I think he's trying to tell us something" said Pascal. "I agree, but I'm not sure how we can find out what he is saying" replied Sophie. They found that the creature was unharmed, all that was wronge was it wasn'y feeling good. They children made sure that the creature made it home safe and then they walked back to their house. "Job well done" said Sophie. "I agree. Thank you for encouraging me to walk farther and help the creature. If i would have missed that opportunity, i would have regretted it." Pascal said. "Anytime" answered Sophie.


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